急!帮我写个英语小短文A A wonderful day in the Beijing World Park（80词左右）提示：星期天,Millie和同学们乘了两个小时的公共汽车来到了北京世界公园.一路上Millie都感觉不舒服(sick),但一进入北京世界公园,看到仿建的(man-made)世界各地一百多处名胜,她立刻被吸引了.他们玩得很高兴.

Sunday, Millie and his classmates took two hours' bus to Beijing World Park. On their way, Millie felt sick, but when arriving the Beijing World Park and seeing hundreds of man-made interested place around world, she was attracted by them. They got a happy trip.

My wonderful day
Today is a Sunday. And it is a colorful day.
My mother said to me :“Open your eyes！And look out of the window. What a fine day! Let’s go to park!”
So my mother, my classmate and I went to the park. We took some foods in my schoolbag. On the way to the park. I saw the blue sky with snow-white clouds. I saw pear trees and some apple trees and so on. Below the trees, there are several kinds of flowers. It’s colorful, blue, red, yellow, pink, purple, orange and white. I saw some balloons and butterflies in the sky. I ate popcorn, cornflakes, banana and lollipop. They were wonderful.
In the afternoon, we went to the zoo. I visited the birds, mice, cats, dogs, budgies, hamsters, rabbits and so on.
Sunday is my favorite day,and today is such a Today is a Sunday. And it is a colorful day.
My mother said to me :“Open your eyes！And look out of the window. What a fine day! Let’s go to park!”
So my mother, my classmate and I went to the park. We took some foods in my schoolbag. On the way to the park. I saw the blue sky with snow-white clouds. I saw pear trees and some apple trees and so on. Below the trees, there are several kinds of flowers. It’s colorful, blue, red, yellow, pink, purple, orange and white. I saw some balloons and butterflies in the sky. I ate popcorn, cornflakes, banana and lollipop. They were wonderful.
In the afternoon, we went to the zoo. I visited the birds, mice, cats, dogs, budgies, hamsters, rabbits and so on.
Sunday is my favorite day,and today is such a wonderful day!

.1楼语法一般嘛Millie and her classmates took two-hour bus to the Beijing World Park on Sunday[On Sunday 放前面也可以].Millie felt sick on her way there.However,once got in to the park,she was immediat...