帮我看看我的文章有没有错误好吗 谢谢拉
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帮我看看我的文章有没有错误好吗 谢谢拉
14th September
Dear Staff,
I’d like to inform you that we are introducing a new training course on presentation in order to enhance our staffs’ capability in some occasions. The course is scheduled at 2:00 p.m. every Friday starting from next week. You can apply for it through our company’s online operational system.
Yours sincerely,
Greg Cai
答
这篇短文总体上没多大问题,细节上我找到了以下问题:
1 第一句里的宾语从句应该用一般将来时比较好;
2 occasion与in搭配不当,把in换成on或是把occasions换成cases
你觉得呢?