我要给在英国的学校写一封E-mail,如何做到言辞礼貌,格式正确?并请给我范文,

问题描述:

我要给在英国的学校写一封E-mail,如何做到言辞礼貌,格式正确?并请给我范文,
STUDIO CAMBRIDGE!我是mark,是今年暑假在这学习的一名中国男孩.在七天的学习中,我学到了很多知识,得到了许多快乐.请替我向所有老师致以感谢!和蔼的Zoe老师,帅气的Jerrimy老师,可爱的Benji老师,强壮的Bob老师…他们都是我生命中最美好的,最绚丽的一抹色彩.感谢整个STUDIO CAMBRIDGE!
在这七天里,我认识了许多朋友,比如 Dima,Vlan.可是,时间匆匆,我没能记住他们的联系方式,我很想把这段友谊继续下去.抱歉的问,您能帮我找到他们的联系方式吗?请询问他们,告诉他们我是那个中国男孩Mark,如果他们同意,请告诉我他们的联系方式,如E-mail,MSN等,
爱你们的中国男孩 Mark
以上是正文,请用标准的格式与礼节为我翻译一下.
请人工翻译,注意单词,语法,大小写等.
请不要用电脑翻译!那样错误太多.
自己细心写出来后(一定要英语水平过关哦!并且懂英国人文礼节!),用word文档发到我邮箱里.

你好:
STUDIO CAMBRIDGE! 我是mark,是今年暑假在这学习的一名中国男孩.在七天的学习中,我学到了很多知识,得到了许多快乐.请替我向所有老师致以感谢!和蔼的Zoe老师,帅气的Jerrimy老师,可爱的Benji老师,强壮的Bob老师…他们都是我生命中最美好的,最绚丽的一抹色彩.感谢他们,感谢整个STUDIO CAMBRIDGE!
Dear headmaster of Studio Cambridge,
This is Mark, a Chinese boy who studied in your school this summer vacation. During the 7 days of learning, I gained much knowledge and joy. Please forward my appreciation to all the teachers: kind-hearted Zoe, charming Jerrimy, lovely Benji and muscular Bob -- They have become the most fascinating and memorible chapter in my life. Thank you all. Thank you Studio Cambridge!
在这七天里,我认识了许多朋友,比如 Dima,Vlan.可是,时间匆匆,我没能记住他们的联系方式,我很想把这段友谊继续下去.抱歉的问,您能帮我找到他们的联系方式吗?请询问他们,告诉他们我是那个中国男孩Mark,如果他们同意,请告诉我他们的联系方式,如E-mail,MSN等,好吗?
During the 7 days, I came to know a lot of friends, like Dima and Vlan. However, time passed so fast that I did not manage to obtain all their contacts. I would very much like to continue the friendship. May I aks if you could let me their contact details? Or if they shall ask, kindly let them know I am the Chinese boy Mark please. If they permit and it's not too much trouble, please be so kind as to let me know their contacts: Email, MSN, etc. Would you let me know if it's alright?

谢谢,再见!
Thank you very much!
With love
The Chinese boy Mark
爱你们的中国男孩 Mark