Mr.KK Kwok work as CEO of our company and is based in HK.His annual remuneration is $100K.写得对吗

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Mr.KK Kwok work as CEO of our company and is based in HK.His annual remuneration is $100K.写得对吗
大大帮忙看下:Mr.KK Kwok work as Chief Executive Offical of our company and is based in *.His annual remuneration is $100000.

应该是works ,company后面的and应该改为,which,引导定语从句.Mr.KK Kwok works as Chief Executive Offical of our company,which is based in *.His annual remuneration is $100000.