我写的一篇英语作文,请大家评价和修改一下,
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我写的一篇英语作文,请大家评价和修改一下,
Love Your mother
As teenagers,we live in a different world from our mother.We often have many different ideas because we are lack of communication,and sometimes we have a quarrel with each other.
But from my point of view,we can't do this.With our age growing,we should know how to make allowances for our mother.In fact,she ,makes you angry just because she loves you.
Mother will always around us when we are in trouble.please love her more than you love yourself.Life is meaningless without her.
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帮你改了一下 主体的意思没变 可能更流畅些As teenagers,we live in a totally different world from our mothers` .We always have different opinions because of the lack of communication.Sometimes it even en...