帮我改改英文作文
帮我改改英文作文
我作了一篇文,是要考口试的,大家看看能不能帮我修改一下.我知道有些地方有点错.开头结尾和为什麽喜欢圣诞节对不对.还有,我写的顺序有没错?
My favourite festival
My favourite festival is Christmas. It is on the 25th of December of every year. Christmas day holiday have 14 day, I am happy.
At Christmas night, my mother also cook traditional Christmas food,
such as turkey and Christmas pudding. My family and I celebrate Christmas every year.
During Christmas holiday, my family and I go on a journey we go on a journey in China, not going abroad. Christmas holiday last day, I do my homework and revision, at the time, I am regret . Anyway,I like Christmas,because Christmas holiday is 14 day.I like Christmas, I Christmas everyday.
My favourite festival is Christmas.It is on the 25th of December every year.I am happy that it has 14 days off.
On Christmas night,my mother always cook traditional food of Christmas.such as turkey and Christmas pudding.My family and I celebrate Christmas every year.
During the Christmas holiday,my whole family and I go for a journey.we are not celebrating in foreign,but in China.
I do my homework and revision while the Christmas ending is coming .Anyway,I like Christmas,because i enjoy myself durning the Christmas holiday.in a word,i like Christmas