My favourite festival小短文

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My favourite festival小短文
要写六一儿童节
1.要把喜欢六一儿童节的原因写清楚
2.要写清你在六一做些什么
3.结尾

要多少字的啊?
My favorite holiday is children's day,because the June 1 children's day are the kid's festival.
In the June 1 children's day this day,the school will organize our time to play some games,for example,the eagle catch chicken,hide and seek,etc.
We can in the June 1 children's day this day to relax myself.
This is my favorite holiday,June 1 children's day.
这样子行吗?