帮我改改英文作文

帮我改改英文作文
这是一篇日记(题目是休闲活动),如果格式或者其他地方错了请帮忙改改.
Dear Diary,
Today is my school holiday ,I play all day.
In the morning,my parent and I went to teahouse,we ate dim sum and chatted.Later,my mother and I went to shopping,in Mong Kok,
I bought clothes and shoes,but my mother bought cosmetic and handbag.
In the afternoon,my mother and I went to Japan restaurant ate lunch,we ate sushi,was very yummy,later,we went to cinema saw a movie,the movie name was Avater,this was science fiction,the film was very hot,the length of a film was 16 minutes,was very good.Eneed the film,I went to swimming in Kowloon Park Swimming Pool,the water was very cold and filthy.
In the evening,my parent and I went to Pizza Hut ate dinner,I ate
Baked Spaghetti Bolongnaise with cheese,was very yummy.Next time,my
friends and I went to Kowloon Park Gymnasium played badminton,we were very tired,later my friend and I went to karaoke,we singer very happy,but I at daybreak to went home.
This is my holiday.
14th 6 June