雅思作文 A country should try to produce all the food to its people and import as little food as po

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雅思作文 A country should try to produce all the food to its people and import as little food as po
以前6的,这次只得了5分,是不是写跑题了?字数没问题,250个左右.disagree
body1 由于中国人多地少,资源不够,技术不够,所以没法自产自足
body2 进口有助于经济文化交流,所以不能取消
body3 有人认为进口打击国内市场,其实进口更有利于国内产品的竞争,提高质量
:A country should try to produce all the food to its people and import as little food as possible.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
第一段出现题目中原词会扣分,在其他段落中呢?就像 produce all the food 整个出现在第二三段,

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