申请某个ID,这样表达正确吗?Below is my information,which to apply for the XXX ID.

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申请某个ID,这样表达正确吗?Below is my information,which to apply for the XXX ID.

My information for applying a XXX ID are as follows.
Here is my information for applying a XXX ID.再请教,加上请求上级的批准,这样写可以吗。Here is my information for applying a XXX ID, and need your support. Thanks a lot.