我即将参加的小学英语老师面试,帮我看看这么写可不可以.

我即将参加的小学英语老师面试,帮我看看这么写可不可以.
Good morning everyone!It’s really my honor to have this opportunity for an interview,I hope I can make a good performance today.I’m confident that I can succeed.Now I will introduce myself briefly.
I am 28 years old ,born in Jiangsu Province.
I was graduated from XX University.My major is biology.I got my bachelor degree and teacher certification after my graduation in the year of 2008.
I spend most of my time on study.I have passed College English Test Band 6 and got Intermediate interpreter certification during my school time.
In July 2008,I began working for XX High School in Wujiang.As a head teacher,my obligation is teaching senior high school students biology and doing class management.Each March I help Grade 11 students pass the graduation exam organized by Jiangsu Education Department.Sometimes I also need to help foreign teachers to finish bilingual education.
As you can see I am young and open-minded,so it is easy for me to communicate with children.I got along well with the students and their parents in my four-year teaching experience.
In my spare time,I have broad interests.Such as singing drawing and calligraphy.By the way,I’m good at photoshop.If you have imperfect photos I will be glad to modify them.
Maybe I’m not so professional in Englishteaching.But in my work,I will try my best.I always believe working hard canbring us opportunites.If I get the chance to join this School I will also goto learn more to improve my English.
That’s all thank you.