请高手来给英语作文改错
问题描述：
请高手来给英语作文改错
I felt happy after I look this book because I get some truth.The fablesshow me how to be a good man.It told me what should I do.We will meetthe bad things in our life.So what should we do?But Aesop told thetruth to us.
最好直接把作文改完以后再吵一次，
答
有错,特别是你那个过去式,还有宾语从句里面的语序也有问题.应该用陈述句的顺序,知道不?