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Many animals and plants are dying out today.What are the causes and what are your solutions?题目是这个...下面就是我的了
Wat is under controversy is the side of animals and plants are dying out.As view on this issue vary from people to people,therefore there is bound to a long-lasting debate on it.
Firstly,from 19th to 21th century,great development of technology were leading to air pollutions what is the main reason.That is to say we must be to dominating the air pollutions.
Secondly,with the development of the persons life style.Almost all persons are relaxing.They may be forgetting to protecing the environment and they are only to enjoy life.That is the second reason.This is mean to be improving persons consciousness.
Thirdly,many rich persons wants to holding more lands,therefore they must be to constructing more and more buildings.Many animals and plants are no to breathe,what is the third reason.then persons must to be binding to its risks.
To sum up,i'd like to do many availability things for animals and plants in my power.I hope all persons can doing with me.I think our worlds will be better.
the most obvious reason is that our environment has been deteriorated by human activities a lot.for example,1the ever -increasing used vehicles has always given rise to the decline in the air quality....