初三的英语作文,帮我修改一下

初三的英语作文,帮我修改一下
Can you imagine life without water?Can you imagine that you can't wash clothes,clean the floor,cook and even drink one day?If you think the water on the earth won't be used up?Maybe you never noticed that the water on the earth is less than before.And the water in the many places hasn't been drink because it wasn't safe for us.So,we must save the water every minute.
But how can we save the water in in life?I think we can use the water has been wash rice to wash vegetables rice.We can use the clean water to wash clothes,and use the dirty water to rush to toilet.It can save much water if everyone does that.And have you have any advece about saving water?
I believe that our lifes won't be without water if everyone saves water!
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