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初一英语
My favourite pet
My favourite pet is a mouse. He is my pet.He is about 1 years old.We called him Dumpling,because he is quite fat.
He has grey-and-black fur.His paws is pink.He has two big black eyes and a shot tail.He huddles like a ball when he sleeps.
He is friendly,but sometimes he is naughty.He ran away for some times.We always find him in the cornerof the room.He is quite quiet.He never makes any noise,even when he is hungry.
He usually eats cereal,sometimes he eats vegetables and fruit.He isn’t any trouble.He lives in a hutch and I put the hutch in a box.He likes to eat apple best.he hates to have a shower.
I feed Dumpling every day and give him clean water.I sometimes paly with him.
Dumpling is really a good friend.He brings me happy and I will look after him until the end.