求大神帮我看看我这篇关于英雄联盟的英语升级演讲PPT有没有什么语法错误或者那些单词错误

求大神帮我看看我这篇关于英雄联盟的英语升级演讲PPT有没有什么语法错误或者那些单词错误
Good afternoon,everyone.Welcome to my presentation my name is lin.First i will ask a question.what would you do when you stay at home?
watch the movies?study?or play cards?But for most of boys ,they may be...play computer games.
today I will introduce this game to everybody.
it is a competition game developed by an American company RoitGames,It is designed by the designers of dotA-Allstars.
It is just like a war
of two countries
and you will control
a hero to fight
for your country
.
In each of the game,there will be two teams
to fight,and every team is composed of five
People .Every person will choose a hero to
Control .the only goal is to win
Some may ask me how to win the game?today i will tell you,you need to a good partner,a good strategy and have a good state of mind.When you win the game you will feel successful.
I think the game is also a way we
communicate with the world
Game is sure to be interesting ,But for most student,It is just an entertainment when we are free.The most important thing is still study.