帮我看看英语语法有没问题啊
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帮我看看英语语法有没问题啊
I most like the famous work is."Jan.Loves" this book leading character Jan Intelligent,good,strong,has the opinion,is most makes one admire.She has encountered many setbacks and rough,but she ever does not lower the head actually to the destiny,any difficulty can feel the fear in front of her.Likes Jane Eyre's self-respect,supports oneself with self-confidently,likes her being loyal to love and being rigid!
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我觉得应该改成这样比较好."Jan Loves" is my favorite famous work.The leading chracter of this book,Jan,who is intelligent,good,strong,and has her own opinion,is most makes one admire.……destiny.Any di...