求助英语句法

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求助英语句法
Seeing our results,exhausted were we,felt satisfied with our valuable efforts.这句话中间有没有问题,我不太确定

如果作为口语用语的话,完全没有问题.作为书面语的话,也勉强说得过去.这句话的大意为:看到成果时,我们尽管很累,但因付出所值而满足.但是如果改成这样就更好了:Seeing our results,we were exhausted and felt satis...