哎,大作文貌似偏题了,some people think goverment should dam dangerous sports,others think
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哎,大作文貌似偏题了,some people think goverment should dam dangerous sports,others think
people have freedom to choose what they like to do..我完全没讨论*,只说了危险运动对人们的利弊..是不是跑题了..而且时间非常赶..后半段几乎是赶出来的..论据也不足..本来觉得前半段写的不错的...能上5.5么.
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不好意思啦,题目问的是*,你写就要写*,叙述对人们的影响,最后也要落实到*,说对人民好,所以*要支持,这才是正路,还要分一段写另一个方面,才可以,所以分不会好,建议准备重考.