my dream 英语作文帮我看看我写的这几句话对不对?
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my dream 英语作文帮我看看我写的这几句话对不对?
Hello everyone It`s my great hour to be here,thank you for giving me this great opportunity from the bottom It`s my heart to speak to all of you on this occasion I am so happy to be here and learn with you this time my speach topic about dream.
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标点符号,语法,单词错误~!
你是演讲稿么?
大家好.我叫~在这里是我的巨大荣誉
谢谢大家给我这个重要机遇与你们大家讲话,此时我是很愉快,我的演讲题目是关于梦想.
参考一下嘛~
Everybody is good.I call am my huge honor thank everybody in here to give me this important opportunity and your everybody speech,this time I am very happy,my lecture topic is about the dream.