请英语高手帮我仔细看下自己写的英语作文有没有什么语法、时态、单词等错误,虚心求教哎

请英语高手帮我仔细看下自己写的英语作文有没有什么语法、时态、单词等错误,虚心求教哎
Thank my parents for giving my life.They're so diligent that them keep on working all day long in order to make a living.And they're so selfless that them always keep all good things for me.Parents have made all they can do to help me grow.
With a grateful heart to treat their parents with a sincere heart to go with their parents,not to be taken for granted that parents do anything to help us,they took us to this beautiful world,is great enough,and our parenting adults,not asking for anything,we have to pay for silence,we stop blindly to demand their pay,Thanksgiving it,thank parents for their bit by bit.
When I am happy,they would share my happiness with me,my parents are the people who love me best,so I have no excuse not to love them.
I will try my best,I want to see the smile in their eyes.I love them forever