关于提建议英语作文!

问题描述:

关于提建议英语作文!
请你给Tom回信,就他父母给他太多课外补习班(after-school classes)提建议.
1 灵活使用firstof all,then,next ,finally 2.80词左右3.四种建议基本句型)
Dear Tom,
I’ve just got your letter and I have someadvice foryou._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I expectyou take(听从)my advice and I am glad to helpyou.
Yours
Li Liang
要求:句子不要太难,初二的水平就可以.要用上面提到的连词.不错就行

My name is pig.