雅思小作文求批改+评论 内容:剑桥8 test 2

雅思小作文求批改+评论 内容:剑桥8 test 2
According to three pie charts,it can be concluded that annual spending by a particular UK school changes from year to year.
Teachers' salaries were the dominant proportion in about 20 years.Over the period from 1981 to 1991,spending on this part grew by 10%,from 40% to 50%.But,it moderately declined to 45% in 2001.
Insurance spending had a slight increase from 2% in 1981 to 3% in 1991.However,there was a considerable increase in insurance spending,compared with the data(3%) in1991.It went up to 8% in2001.
Nevertheless,spending on other workers' salaries dropped year by year.There was a downward trend.It decreased from 28% in 1981 to 22% in 1991.Consequently,it descended to only 5% in 2001.
There were some similarities between resources spending and spending on furniture and equipment.They both experienced up and down over a span of 20 years.Resources ascended to 22% in 1991,6% more than spending in 1981.However,it plummeted to 9% in 2001.Likewise,spending on furniture and equipment decreased by 10% to 5% in 1991.Then,it soared to 23% in 2001.
Three pie charts depict that the major percentage of spending is teachers' salaries,which occupy about half of the chart.Other spending,like insurance,resources,will float up and down.
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