China is one makes all the Chinese people feel proud nation

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China is one makes all the Chinese people feel proud nation
这个句子有语病吗,是正确的吧、

应该在one和makes中间加上that构成定语从句才对.同时,最后的那个nation要前移到one后面.
否则的话句子两个谓语动词,这在语法上是错误的.