给我找错误,我自己写的短文
问题描述：
给我找错误,我自己写的短文
My name is Jack.l have a beautiful dream.l hope my hone have a robot in the future in the future.The robot name is superman.l like superman very much.Because he could do many things.For example,he could clean the room,cook dinner,play with dog and play football.He was also play with me .So,l like superman very much.
l hope my dream come ture.
注意看看我的时态,那些词应该写成将来时的
错的给我改改
答
l hope my hone have a robot in the future in the future.改为
I hope there will be a robot in my home in the future.
The robot name is superman改为The robot's name will be Superman
He was also play with me改为He can also play with me.
l hope my dream come ture.改为I hope my dream will come ture