该两篇英语作文（初三）

该两篇英语作文（初三）
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In grade nine,many students have much homework.So it's different frome taking part in after-clss activites ot not taking part in.
Some students want to join it,because it can make study hard more smallier and make our bodies more stronger,and it can made our friendship.
Some students don't want to do it.Because it spends times and make our energy more smallier.And if the activities over,it feels very tried,and influence the study.
I think we should have after-class activities,but not many times.
This Saturday is Wang Hong's birthday,many students will go her home to take part in her birthday party.
Wang Hong has many hobbies,and she kinds of everyone,and she often help his parents to do housework.
Her classmates decide to get some money from to parents and buy some gifts to her.
I don't think buy some gifts is a good idea,we can make some gifts by hand and give her.