谁能帮我改下这句话的时态.其中lost,she is .created还有who is perhaps 这几个地方.
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谁能帮我改下这句话的时态.其中lost,she is .created还有who is perhaps 这几个地方.
She lost all contact with her son,and she is shunned from proper society.Tolstoy created a woman who is perhaps most tragic character in his work.
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改成什么时态?我也搞不懂了 修改了老师说可以了，但是现在又和我说时态有问题，又没说哪有问题 = =貌似时态不一致啊。或者这样：She has lost all contact with her son, and she is shunned from proper society. Tolstoy created a woman who was perhaps most tragic character in his work.亦或这样：She lost all contact with her son, and she was shunned from proper society. Tolstoy created a woman who was perhaps most tragic character in his work.我感觉这里的She是个书中的人物，所以在描述她的时候用现在时应该可以。不过，无论用哪种，前后的大时态（过去、现在、将来）应该一致，因为前后时间并没有发生变化。至于后面那句，既然用了created，我觉得定语从句中也用过去式比较好。 非专业，仅供参考，欢迎各路大神共同探讨