应该有语法错误,谁能够帮忙纠正英语作文的语法错误?

The summer vacation is coming to an end（,=>句子已完整表达,应用句号） I （attend=>attended) an English summer camp (+this year),it (is very interesting,I can't forget=>was so interesting that I couldn't forget（,=>句子已完整表达,应用句号）( let=>Let) me talk about (the things on there=>a few things there at the camp).
Our (teacher is=> teachers are) from Canada,but they are Koreans (,=>句子已完整表达,应用句号） I (get=>got assigned to the) pink team(,make=> and made) many friends.My teacher is very beautiful,her name is (esther=>人名首字母大写Esther).
(We always have some meaningful activities.We recite the Holy Bible,watching the video,=>The activities we had were always quite meaningful,such as reciting the Holy Bibile and watching the video.)
(the words of Scripture that I get inspiration.=> And,I got inspired by the words of the Scripture.)
We also (learn=> learned) many English songs (that Christian followers sing) in praise of Jesus,I think these songs are very (nice=>beautiful).
Make the game we all very happy.=>不确定这句话你想表达什么意思,欢迎补充了追问.
We （have the=> had a) talent contest,the pink team (worked) very hard (,although=>.Although we) did not win,(but not sad=>we were not too sad.)
I was there every day a new harvest,=> There was something new that I learned every day.
at the last moment,everyone was crying.(We were all reluctant to see the camp activities wrapped up,everyone cried at the last moment.)
Next year I will （also=>删除） attend the summer camp （+again）!