句子语法逻辑有没有错
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句子语法逻辑有没有错
Nowadays a great number of people have become successful due to their long time's effort while many other people have the desire to succeed truly as well.However,it's certain that being a truly successful person that everyone show respect for isn't the same as which common people consider as.
答
the desire to succeed 是说 对成功的 信念.跟前面的很多人为了 成功做长期的努力 够不成一个while的关系.while 要么表示同时 要么表示然而,放在这里都不合适.后面一句,改成 it's certain that being a truly successful person that not everyone show respect for the same as which common people consider as.