英语,这句话有错吗?为什么.

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英语,这句话有错吗?为什么.
this strategy not only enhances the communication of west and east but also benefits the students.

this strategy not only enhances the communication between the west and the east, but also provides benefits for students.
应该改成这样比较好吧.west 和east 前面加the,表特指. students前边不要the因为泛指所有的学生,不是特定的.加逗号分开 not only.,but also的句型.用between.and.表示.和.之间的交流