Today is the last day of winter holiday.求检查语法错误
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Today is the last day of winter holiday.求检查语法错误
Today is the last day of winter holiday.I had a very nice vacation.Everything went according to my holiday plan.I went to Vancouver for shopping.And in other days i stay at home study English.At home I watched a lot of English movies.Such as Twilight,The Hobbit and so on.They are all very good movies.I'm not only watch it but also repeat the word they say in my mind to improve my English.
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楼主!
last day "in" the winter holiday
I "have" had a very nice vacation
"But" in other days I "stayed" "to" study English.
(and so on) 去掉
They "were" all.
"I" not only "watched" "them" but also "repeated" the "words" they "said" in my mind to improve my English "skills".