找错误（英文对话）
问题描述：
找错误（英文对话）
A:Hello!Is Tim at home?
B:Oh,he isn't here,he is out.Who's that?
A:I'am lily.I want ask him some questions.
B:Can I help you
A:Yes,thanks.I'll leave a message,you can give him when he comes back.
B:Please wait a moment.Let me write it down....Please tell me what you'll tell him.
A:Please tell him give me a phone back when he comes back.
B:What's your number?
A:My number is 6598412.
B:Got it.I'll tell him .
A:Thank you.Goodbye.
B:Bye-bye.
这是我提问的答案,请大家找找有没有错误,如果没有我明天就拿去上英会上用了
答
I want ask him some questions.want后加一个to.Please wait a moment.Let me write it down....Please tell me what you'll tell him.最好变一下说法可以改成 Hold on please....OK,go ahead please.tell him give ...