急死了!改错文章

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急死了!改错文章
My friends and me always sat together to have lunch on the same table.One day we found that Carol was sitting near us.She is the girl everyone in school treated badly because the shabby clothes she wore.I could feel that she heard nothing my friends were saying about her and she looked really sad.I started up conversation with her.After that day on,I talked to her every day.Actual,she was a nice girl and we had many in common.We are like sisters before and I'm happy I spoke to her that day.
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me - I
everyone -去掉
nothing -something
my frends -前加what
started up -started to make a
on -去掉
Actual -Actually
many -something
before -now
spoke -talked
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