修改英语作文,
修改英语作文,
Dear Lin Tao,
I'm sorry to hear that you are so stressed out for the end of middle school exam.And I have some advice for you,I hope it is helpful .
First,I think you shouldn't stay up too late to do homework,because it's bad for your health,and it may makes you always argue with others.And I think you shouldn't give yourself too much pressure,it's bad for your study,too.And if you feel tired,you can listen to music for relax,and take a walk is a good way,too.
And if you still feel stressed out,you could send a letter for me to tell the reason.
Good lucky!
Yours,
Happy.
And if you feel tired,you can listen to music for relax,and take a walk is a good way,too.这句话有错,应改为：you can listen to music to realx,and taking a walk is a good way.（你可以听音乐来放松.表示...