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My hobby
Every one have many hobbies,of course,the same as me.
My favorite sports is basketball.Although my basketball skill isn't very good,but I still like basketball.I often play basketball with my friends,and watch NBA basktball games.
Also,I like computer games like many children.My favorite compuer game is Cross Fire.This game like that very famous game called Counter-Skrike.
My hobby is here.How about you?

Everyone has many hobbies.Of course,me,too.
My favorite sport is playing basketball.Although my basketball skill isn't very good,but I still like basketball.I often play basketball with my friends,and watch NBA basktball games.
Also,I like computer games like many children.My favorite compuer game is Cross Fire.This game likes the very famous game called Counter-Skrike.
My hobby is above.How about you?