if i have a lot of money初中英语作文 不少80字!

If I had a lot of money
If I had a lot of money,I would build a great building—theater.
The other day,I went to the theater watched a great National song and dance show.every performers were very excited,they gave us a best show.
I knew,everybody wanted a stage to show themselves,so if I had a lot of money,I would build a theater,and maked my theater be famous around the world.
It’s a great idea.that stage could achieve somebody’s dream.
I maked up the dream,and,what my dream?
Just be a angel to make other people’s dream come ture?I also want to travel all over the world.
I would spend some money for my family’s health and let them achieved their old dream that never came ture.
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If I have a lot of money,then .
I would use the money in the following areas
First I would buy books I want to see,I think that knowledge is power,I need to recharge
The second point I would buy a big house,Shanghai's housing prices are expensive,I live in the environment of a small place is not good.
Third,I prepared for her to give pensions for the elderly when they can live a comfortable If I have a lot of money,I will share with my family and Children should not have too much money,parents should strictly adhere to good use their money to make money and cultivate their independence and a good habit of thrift and economy.Told them the money should be well spent.
可以缩短一些不必要的段落.