我写的英文短文中的几句,1.He went to supermaket to buy some foods.

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我写的英文短文中的几句,1.He went to supermaket to buy some foods.
2.He was going to have a party on the next day.
是改错,自己写的不知有什么问题,我是初二的学生,还有两句:3..they took snake food and drinks with them.4.success will come after you work hard.

第一句应该这样改:He went to the supermarket to buy some food.
第二句应该这样改:He was going to have a party the next day.