短文改错,注:每处错误及其修改仅限一词,只允许修改10处 When I was young,I didn't know what friendship.when I stayed with my friends,a warm feeling

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短文改错,注:每处错误及其修改仅限一词,只允许修改10处 When I was young,I didn't know what friendship.when I stayed with my friends,a warm feeling came out of the bottom from my heart.Now l have grown up and get many friends.And I have tasted the pleased feeling of friendship.When I am happy,they are also happy and share the happy with me.When I make progress,they will be more exciting than I.Therefore,when I'm in a difficult situation,they will offer help to me.But friendship is never an one-way ticket.If we want to get it,we must treat others good first.We should always be ready to help the others,especially when they are in difficult situations.

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