英文self-assessment 改错、修正

英文self-assessment 改错、修正
我会加分给所有给出正确“更改和理由”,及提出有益“建议或可添加内容”的好心人~
顺便一提,这是一个非临床专业医学生的自我评价~无意义回答将被投诉~
I come from the school of public health of XXX University.I have completed all the basic clinical and professional disciplines.And I've been an intern of the 3rd Affiliated Hospital of XXX University and XXX People's Hospital.Now I practice at XXX CDC in Guangzhou.During my campus life,I've been the minister of publicity department at our school radio station for two years.There I have learnt making posters by both hand and computer.My interest is in painting and aquatic plants.
这是一篇书面的自我评价,怎么说呢?写成这样已经到达我的极限,无论大词、句式,以我的能力已经是不行了.所以,可否请帮忙的好心人直接整理文章,发全篇给我能?就是把改动直接放进这文里,发全文给我.不是我偷懒,实在是能力有限啊~