有十处错误,找出并改正,并说明原因,Thank you very much for invite me

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有十处错误,找出并改正,并说明原因,Thank you very much for invite me
Thank you very much for invite me to your birthday party in Saturday morning .I’d like to come and I have to go to my hometown to see my grandparents .They were very old and unluckily they are not in a good health recently.My mother has already made a telephone call to them and promised visit them sorry I can’t attend your party.I hope you will understand all this.Here I wish you a lot fun on your birthday and much happy returns of the day.

1) invite -- inviting2) in Saturday morning -- on Saturday morning3) and -- but4) I have to -- I will have to5) They were -- They are6) they are not -- they haven't been7) in a good health -- in good ...各项修改能说明一下理由吗1)for是介词,后面要跟名词或动名词。2)在某一天的上、下午、晚上用on.。3)I would like/love/prefer to...,习惯用but表示转折。4)从上下文知是将不得不。5)现在的情况。6)时间状语recently,一般用现在完成时,或一般过去时。7)health不可数名词,去掉a。8)promise + to do/that clause。9)a lot 不能修饰名词,修饰名词要用a lot of,fun 是名词。10)returns是可数名词复数,所以要用many修饰,much修饰不可数名词。希望对你有所帮助,祝学习进步、快乐!我问了几位友人,总结一下有如下疑问:1、all this改为allthese。2、unluckily改为unlucky。3、attend改为join in或take part in。4、happy改为happier或happiness,其前的much不变。你认为呢?并且能帮助翻译此段吗?1}all this不需要改,因为说的是一件事情,2)unluckily=unfortunately,不能用unluck,3)参加,这三个都可以,4)happy修饰returns的,returns是名词复数,用many,我已经讲得很清楚了。译文:非常感谢你邀请我参加你周六上午的生日派对。我很想光临,可那时我将不得不回老家去看望我的爷爷奶奶。他(她)们年事已高,且最近健康状况不佳。我妈妈已经给他(她)们打电话承诺要去看他(她)们,因此,抱歉不能参加你的派对。这一点希望你能理解。我祝你生日过得快乐并收获颇丰!大体就这样,希望对你有所帮助,祝你学习进步,快乐学习!说明:我是中学英语教师,高级职称,从事英语教学超30年了。再请教:1、unluckily为副词,be后面应加unlucky形容词作表语才对呀。2、all后可以接this这样表示单数的词语吗?有人说用all of this,有这种用法吗?3、最后一句中wish sb sth这种用法有吗?拜托详细一点,谢谢luckily,unluckily副词,意思是:幸运的是/不幸的是......all this/allthat,all these / all those。 all 既可以加单数也可以加复数。wish sb. sth.有这种用法。如:I wish you a happy birthday.我麻烦问你一下,你是高中学生还是初中学生?或是其他?常联系噢!。。。。。。