does what madam said come ture?(中译英, 大家帮我看看哪有错?)
does what madam said come ture?(中译英, 大家帮我看看哪有错?)
Thursday November .18th 2010cloudy
I decided to visit a fortune-teller called, Madam Bellinsky at a village fair. When I went into her tent, she let me sit down. After I had given her some dollars, she started looking into a crystal ball and said: “a relation of yours will come to visit you; she will arrive late in this afternoon and prepare to live for a few days. You will be surprised to go out of the tent. A woman you know well will rush towards you and she says will say something to you. And lead you to leave here. That is all.”
I had hardly forgotten what madam Bellinsky said to me when I gone out of the tent because my wife rushed towards me. “Where do you go?” she asked with impatience. “Your sister will come here in less than an hour. We have to go to the station to meet her. It’s late, now.” when she went always, I followed her to go out of the fair.
第二行 After I gave .一般过去时应该就行吧.
第四行 in 去掉.live 改为 stay 吧
第五行 says 去掉
倒数第四行 Where have you been?
倒数第二行 always?打错了貌似; 改为I followed her out of the fair.