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Yesterday I went to climb the mountain with my father,our car stopped at a very high at the foot of the mountain,that is when two o’clock.
At ten past two,we started to climbing the mountain,the mountain was very steep.Two hours later,we climbed up the top of the mountain.We were very happy.The mountain’s air was very fresh,and the scenery was very beautiful,i was very happy.
I like the mountains,I like the trip.
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【评点】 Yesterday Iwent to climb the mountain (爬山是一种活动,需要用 went climbing to themountain with my father,(逗号要改为句号或分号) our carstopped (parked) at a very high (删除 very)at the foo...