How can u look into my eyes, like through a door

问题描述:

How can u look into my eyes, like through a door
这句话通顺吗? 有什么不对的地方?

又来这里问了……你能不能说说这句话怎么来的啊?说实话,我咋看都觉得部对劲……
也许可以这样:
How can you look through my eyes and read my mind?