英语短文改错谁帮做下!I wonder if i can get some helps from you.I was so careful that i left my case on the no.213 train from beiji
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英语短文改错谁帮做下!I wonder if i can get some helps from you.I was so careful that i left my case on the no.213 train from beijing to tianjin in august 24th,2009.My case is square.it was made in china.it was brown in colour.i have my name and address on the case.Inside of the case,i have a umbrella,some books,two shirts,a cake of soap,a tube of toothpaste and a toothbrush.I either have a pair of trousers,a cup and apair of shoes.
答
helps改为help careful改为careless
in改为on ,was made 改为is made ,was 改为is
of 去掉,a改为an
either 改为also