帮我看看我的英语作文有错吗

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帮我看看我的英语作文有错吗
I think the best things are free.Because the clean air and the sunshine are good for us.People and animals need air and sun.If the world doesn't have sun and air.People and animals will die
So i think the best things are free
老师好多没讲过,我是凭在外补习的经验写的

没有语法错误 就是写的有些平淡我也就能写这点水平,呵呵嗯 七年级这样也不错了 建议air and sun are needed by people and aninmals 比较有顺意思是什么