看一下这篇英语文章有什么错误?

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看一下这篇英语文章有什么错误?
China
China is a country with 5000 years of cultural tradition.
China is a vast land,is a large country.Have 9.6 million kilometers of land.It has a population of 1.3 billion.
The Yangtze River and Yellow River runs through the whole of China.In Tibet and Nepal border,the highest peak in the world is the Mount Everest.The Great Wall is one of the Seven Wonders of the World architectural marvels.
China is one of the four ancient civilizations.In ancient China has four great inventions,they were a compass,papermaking,printing and gunpowder.And condensed the essence of Chinese ancient literature of the four great classics.
I like Chinese!
这是我根据我的意思,用有道翻译,翻译的。

1.China is a vast land,is a large country.Have 9.6 million kilometers of land改为China is a large country with vast land occupying 9.6 million kilometers.2.The Yangtze River and Yellow River runs thro...