作文：on the way to school
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作文：on the way to school
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on zhe way to school
today,i am walk to school.on the way to school,i can see lots of flower,
Grass,flowers,birds and many of the people there have a pleasant talk together
The sun laugh reddening,roadside flowers smiled bent the waist,a breath of fresh air,pleasant walk to school.
While I went to the school,recall the way I encountered the scenery was very comfortable way to school is so beautiful.
不知道是否可以给点建议呗