英语作文,帮我看看有哪些地方错了

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英语作文,帮我看看有哪些地方错了
假如我是树,我们想对人们说些什么
题目what we trees want to say
hello,every!You are our good friend!i love you very much!but, why do you cut us down? you know, we can protect the environment. for instance we can make frensh air and take in CO2 stop the water from breaking your house and so on. so it is necessary for you to protect us. what should you do ? you should plant more trees. you mustn't cut down the trees .you should wash trees on time. i believe you can do that. let's to protect the environment
错误的单词和语句的毛病都帮我找出来. 作文满分15 看看我能拿多少
非常感谢!
没时间才不大写的,而其那个every是我漏掉的。。- -

hello,every(everyone)!You are our good friend(s)!i love you very much!but,why do you cut us down?you know,we can protect the environment.for instance we can make frensh(fresh) air and take in CO2 stop the water from breaking your house and so on.so it is necessary for you to protect us.what should you do you should plant more trees.you mustn't cut down the trees .you should wash(water) trees on time.i believe you can do that.let's to protect the environment
还有注意标点符号,和开头要大写