帮我提些修改建议吧·· 同不同意：people should not pay to use the public transportation.

帮我提些修改建议吧·· 同不同意：people should not pay to use the public transportation.
I agreed absolutely this viewpoint,the people should be free to use the public transportation.The importance of public transportation is self-evident.Free policy can greatly encourage people to use the public transportation.This is the best way to preserve natural resources,reducing pollution,and solving serious traffic problems.
First of all,free public transportation policy can help more people to use public transportation,and to renounce the use of private cars,thus saving large energy for society.As a planet,we’re dealing with a finite amount of natural resources.Once they're gone,they can't be replaced.They can't fill our need for oil and gasoline forever.But we seem to forget that and consume them at an incredible rate.In wealthier counties,some families have two or three cars.As soon as teenagers get their driver's licenses,they’re given cars.Private cars become more and more,they’re greatly accelerating the depletion of oil resources.
What is more serious.As a result of all the cars being driven,we’re dealing with terrible pollution problems.The government must adopt the new policy to urge the people to use the public transportation in order to change this present situation.In big cities,there are days during the summer when the elderly and people with respiratory problems are advised not to leave the house.To solve these environmental pollution problems,the Government not only should implement a free policy public transportation,but also it should definitely spend more money on improving all forms of public transportation.
On the other hand,it’s a very good social welfare,the poor and many of the general staff can save a lot of travel expenses to improve their lives,so that it can close the gap between rich and poor,to promote the harmony of social.What’s more,it also can encourage people’s sense of community.People who travel to work together all the time get to know each other.
I always try to take public transportation whenever possible,and I encourage friends and neighbors to try it too.If the public transportation is free,I thought that I didn’t need to urge them again,the world must be better.