Hi Master Win,I want to tell you that I will be moving to Mianyang in a couple weeks.I have a new job at a university th

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Hi Master Win,I want to tell you that I will be moving to Mianyang in a couple weeks.I have a new job at a university there.I hope you are still having a wonderful time in France :-)

是看看有没有错误吗?第一句有两个错误.I want to tell you that I will move to(为什么用be moving to?) in a couple of weeks(固定用法).
I get a new job比have a new job 要好.